seen as my short story is taking ages, i am going to post my first 2 chapters of my full story on here for you :D hope you like it because ive allready had people say its really good =] x
Chapter 1
The Start of Life
I never knew how I turned out like this but when I reached
the age of sixteen, everything changed. I became more depressed with age, my
dress sense changed and I became more lonely. I started losing friends but the
only thing that didn’t changed in my life and school were my studies. For some
reason I was top of every class I was in, even getting A* through every class
as well, I was on fire ‘ha-ha’. The only thing I couldn’t get away from was my
looks. All the guys loved looking at me, I don’t know why, but they thought I
looked amazing. They say I’m the most beautiful girl in the school, but I
cannot see that at all maybe that’s why I have no friends and why all the girls
can’t stand me.
But one day that all changed, as I turned seventeen and left
school. Then just four months later I finished my armed forces training and
self-defence classes. I didn’t continue my stay at the army, it just didn’t
seem like it was my path to take, and to top that of I am so confused about my
sexuality. So one day I got a fake I.D and went out clubbing and also to get so
drunk, so I could replace the depressing thoughts circling round my head.
Later that evening in the local nightclub, “Life” Scarlet
was sat at the bar drinking shot after shot, until she was stopped by a young
beautiful brunette woman. She wanted a chat and as soon as scarlet saw her; she
started to feel different to what she normally feels like when she is around
men and women. This brunette was different, she gave scarlet Goosebumps and her
heart started pounding and the butterflies kicked in, it made her scared
because she is already confused about her sexuality and she never feels like
that around women. As scarlet was admiring her she noticed that she was wearing
the most amazing blood red tightly fitted dress, she had ever seen and it
suited the brunette very well. She looks like an angel she was beautiful and as
soon as this woman started to talk to her they hit it off right away. She made
Scarlet very happy, but as the night came to an end for Scarlet and she began
to sober up, her butterflies grew bigger and bigger inside of her so badly that
it scared her and then Scarlet and the brunette went silent for a few seconds,
then out of nowhere came a question that Scarlet was not expecting “How old are
you actually Scarlet I can figure out that you’re not eighteen?” As Scarlet
stood there silent she finally replied back “……sigh, I have only just turned
seventeen please don’t say anything to anyone please.”
Then the brunette answered “Don’t worry my love I won’t say
anything and I am so sorry I forgot to tell you my name its Carrie-Anne and I
still cannot believe how old you are but I do understand I have been through
what you’re going through I’m twenty-two so I’ve been through a lot of shit
growing up but I fought through it scarlet, don’t worry you will get there. I
mean you’re so beautiful for your age you shouldn’t even really be in a night
club the way you look, the amount of perverts and older guys looking for sex
its dangerous place for a young and pretty girl like you.” But then Scarlet
shrugged her shoulders and then started to walk out the club until Carrie
stopped her and then turned her around “Please don’t leave Scarlet, I have
really started to like you, I mean we hit it of really well why spoil that
please stay?” Scarlet then replies,“I am sorry Carrie but I have to.” Then
Carrie pulled Scarlet close and then she looked in to Carries eyes with such
sorrow and loneliness and then they kissed. As they were kissing Scarlet was
thinking to herself about her life and how she feels and how Carrie is changing
the way she thinks and acts. She has never been like this before, but then she
realised she is not alone anymore and then a tear fell from her eyes she was
just mesmerized, it was almost like a trance as if Carrie was controlling her.
Then Scarlet’s hand started to slowly move up Carrie-Anne’s stomach and chest,
moving it up and down against her tightly fitted red dress and they just kept
on kissing until Scarlet finally moved away and said “sorry but I have to go, I
really do hope we meet again you make me feel whole, like no one has ever made
me feel before, thank you, you’re so special to me now, be careful you take
care of yourself bye.” Then Scarlet kissed Carrie on the cheek and left, Carrie
just stood there silent and upset looking towards to exit just as Scarlet was
walking out and then that was the last time Carrie saw of Scarlet.
As Scarlet left the club it started to rain. The rain got
heavier and heavier as the night went on. As she kept walking away from the
club, Scarlet could hear footsteps behind her, but every time she turned around
there was no one there and then she saw an alley ahead of her and turned into
it. She then finally found out where the footsteps came from, a group of men
surround Scarlet in the alley and she had no way of escaping. Scarlet tried her
best to run and fight back but the men were just too strong for her to handle,
as she tried to run one of the men hit her across the face and then she fell
straight to the ground where she landed in a large puddle of water. As her head
hit the floor she blacked out and the group of men jumped on her before she had
time to wake up. They were like animals on her, ripping her shirt apart,
tearing her jeans to bits; they weren’t going easy on her. Scarlet started
slowly waking up from her daze and she was in pain, the worst pain she has ever
been in, in her life. The weight of the men on top of her was unbearable; she
was starting to feel suffocated. It got worse too when she was starting to
think that there was no escape for her, then a tear fell from her eye as she
looked across the floor to see that the button on her jeans has been ripped
off.
As she laid there forced to the floor she could feel the
hands of the men all over her body, groping her and in the end they just forced
her in to sex. The longer and harder they kept going for, Scarlet’s heart got
slower and slower and just stopped, she died. The men just carried on without
any doubts or feelings towards it, they were acting even more like animals even
more so than before. Just moments after Scarlet died, a shadow started to
circle around her body and the group of men and then stopped and hovered over
Scarlet’s body. As the leader of the group looked up and saw the shadow, he got
the others off her and stepped back from her body and they just stood there and
watched fog floating over her face like a soul entering her body. As the fog
disappeared it was like the soul and Scarlet connected. The water that
surrounded Scarlet starts to ripple, as her body lay there music starts to play
in her dreams, and as the beats start to pattern up with her brain and heart
they grow inside of her and become real. It’s almost like she is evolving in to
an unnatural entity. When the beats got louder and more powerful the ripples got
a lot stronger and almost became like waves in the open sea. Then, out of nowhere
lighting strikes on to Scarlet just as the music starts and then everything
stops and goes silent. The group of men are just standing there in shock; they
have never seen anything like it ever in their lives and as they turn around
they heard a noise behind them and turned to look and they saw her hovering off
the floor and then her eyes opened. They could feel the slow, cold shivers
running down there spin and all of a sudden the earth and water crumbled in-to
pieces and lifts of the ground slowly and when she looks at the group of men
she screams, then her eyes turn purple and then she lifted the group of the
ground and ripped them all apart.
Scarlet landed back on the floor in shock from what just
happened but then she just slowly walked in to the distance and out of sight,
like nothing happened. But one of the men’s body was still living just about,
his brain and heart were still functioning slowly, but his other body parts
were pretty much hanging off him. Then a small ripple came from the puddle next
to him and out came a scary looking shadow of a hand and then pulled him in to
the puddle. He then just vanished without a trace.
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