Shes comes out from within the Darkness

Today guys i introduced my co - main character to my recent story and at the moment her nickname is bass pounder, but im still not to sure on wether to keep tht nickname or change it? so if you would like to send your views please do it would help and btw do not forget that this is just a hobbie of mine at the moment so you might find a few mistakes or misspellings and it you would like to tell me just say and dont go all judgemental or profess on my arse XD aha soo Below is the Intro to where i have brought Bass pounder into my story :D hope you like?? i can tell tho i didnt write the 2nd part to it because i think its to good to bee in the preview ;P AHA you will have to wait till i finish :P enjoy

*Music was playing and then the Bass Dropped a thundering beam of light and sound shot towards them and took them out, all at once and the power of it even took Anja out which was a surprise because of the amount of strength Anja has. The Bass slowed down again and from within the darkness walks out a young girl, who was about 22 and with each step she took, little coloured sparks of light arose from the ground and with each of those lights and steps they were some how triggerd by the sound that surrounds her, it was like everything was synchronized and then from Anjas view, it looked liked her abilitys worked and got more powerful with sound, she must have found out how to control her abilitys and use her sound as a weapon and when another beat came, she looked up and smiled "I AM BASS POUNDER!!"*